Board Thread:Misc./@comment-14745711-20170517034952/@comment-1327106-20170519040336

Hey, I read it, and the one thing that stuck out at me, is that Petra doesn't try crossdressing after getting rejected. If she's that determined, it seems it would be a more effective workaround than sitting outside in silent protest. There have been multiple women in varying points in history who have disguised themselves as men and enlisted in time of war. There might be reasons she couldn't easily do this (mandatory medical exams?), but the thought that it didn't even cross her mind was odd to me.

I did like the snark about the ability to pass that test involving the measurement of a certain part of male anatomy. That was good.

The last thing that I hoped you were going for, but I'm not sure that you were, was why Levi set Petra's goals so high. I expected that she would actually be tested harder than a man in an attempt to flunk her out, but at the end after she thinks she fails the last test, Levi doesn't let her follow her own conclusion and see herself out (which seems like the sexist thing he would have let happen). It felt like it would have taken a little more than aceing the tests to earn his respect.

Anyway, I know that story is already done, but I see the dynamic you want for the comic and I think you can make it work.