Thread:Phil1403/@comment-24930713-20151209074916

Congrats on making your first article. That being said, I've made quite a few changes to put it more in line with the other object pages. So I've got a few things to mention regarding that:


 * First, when adding manga images to the wiki, it needs to be void of English writing. We generally try to use the Japanese raws for images, but they seem quite difficult to obtain in a decent quality. At the very least, try to cut out or paint over the words without destroying the image, so that we aren't uploading the manga in full to the wiki. Also, try not to upload entire pages unless it's absolutely necessary to describe what's supposed to be happening in the image.


 * When it comes to references and page setup up, we use for the box where all the references will go, and  for the actual references we add to various parts of the page. There are also different types of navigation templates for each main category. Most of our templates add specific categories, some quite a few of them don't need to be added manually to the page.


 * When it comes to Bertolt's name, we end it in a "t" on this wiki. Also try to add relevant links to other pages, it helps lead people to possibly less popular pages.


 * Not a big deal, but it seems to me that English is not your native language. Which is fine we don't bite people's heads off for that sort of thing. But since you seem to know enough, I ask that you be a little more careful; some of the spelling errors seem like they were due to speeding. We also prefer that pages are written in a in-universe style, so things like "in chapter" or " in the anime" are strongly preferred not to be added to main parts of the page. There are exceptions to that rule and in general, everything is explained in a little more detail here.

Otherwise, that's probably one of the better starts I've seen a new person make to a page. Headers and adding words under an image seem to be the more difficult things to figure out. The only other thing I could think of is your previous edits need more words and less headers. You had quite a few, but some of them only had a sentence or two under them. Couple that with adding images, and the page seems to look very empty. 