Board Thread:Off topic/@comment-31940900-20160809035550

So I've improved in my art skills, and wanted some input on a story I'm writing.

Three hundred years ago, the fog came, and with it were hordes of monsterous creatures straight out of the nightmares of men. The remaining humans fled underground, in fear of the fog and the monsters who thrived in it.

Our hero is an ex thug named juno holtz, who after a failed smuggling venture escapes the wrath of his underboss and joins the military.

While in the military, he'll learn of a vast conspiracy, and the secrets of the monsters, fog, and the key to creating a better world. 