User blog:Miskos3/Before the Fall: Chapter 2, Discussion

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Unfortunately, no matter how hard I try, I cannot find anything good to say about the Before the Fall series so far. The art feels quite weird, as I stated last time, the artist seems to be trying too hard.

As for this chapter, all I can say is... boring. Everything felt way too cliched, especially the ending (who wants to bet that she'll end up in love with the guy?) the characters that were introduced can hardly be thought of as interesting. The story so far doesn't show anything significant, although perhaps it's too early to judge as it's only been two chapters. Given the premise though... I will be surprised if this gets remotely interesting anytime soon.

Discuss.