User blog comment:Hfc2x/Wiki activity/@comment-3118594-20131025192638/@comment-2214433-20131025230839

A few remarks:

- As it's a summary, you're describing the events from the point of a third person directly watching the events, basically a narration of kinds, aka 'in-universe' writing thus:
 * -No direct speech
 * -Write in present tense unless you're writing a History section and alike.
 * -No "In this chapter" "This chapter starts with" "The scene switches to" etc. That's not in-universe writing
 * -Those .... incomplete sentences don't look too well, use linking words to tie sentences or paragraphs

And what's up with that font o.O Do people actually use the visual editor of the wiki

Just some CnC :)