Thread:Mokninart/@comment-27441457-20170510053215

Good work on updating Marley's page! However, in the future you should avoid drawing parallels to the real world in the main body of the article. Pages should remain in-universe in terms of perspective, though this doesn't apply to Trivia sections for comparisons like these.

Also, please place citations after punctuation marks and only use officialy-used translations in the writing unless no official name applies, such as "Titan shifters". 