Thread:Abcaweome/@comment-32261140-20181119232550

I decided to undo your edits, (instead of rewording it or anything) after taking a look at them all. Effectively, besides what I counted as: 6 cases of incorrect capitalization, 5 grammatical mistakes, 2 spelling errors, and other cases of poor syntax, the main issue here is to do with repetition and relevance.

For example, the trivia ("As Bertolt is taciturn his Reactions and opinions are often emoted through expressions rather than speech") does not really qualify as relevant. Being taciturn is a point for the personality section, not the trivia, and having opinions shown by expressions probably isn't relevant enough to be put anywhere.

Bertolt being a Warrior had already been brought up in the ability section, so was not necessary to repeat.

Generally, if you want us to not revert your edits, you'll need to undergo a large improvement in your grammar and syntax. As of now, your edits aren't up to the level of quality control we uphold for the wiki, and so needs to be improved. I imagine most editors here don't particularly want to spend time changing around capitalization, or rewording shaky writing. This is particularly true if not everything you write about is necessary or relevant. Therefore, I implore you to please improve your writing quality, even just the capitalization. 