Board Thread:Shingeki no Kyojin Wiki/@comment-5774380-20150329004214/@comment-24930713-20150331013558

JinxTheFunhouse wrote: Locket, thank you for pointing out a minor error in an attempt to make me appear as a poor writer. I would like to tell you that "all most" is actually spelled "almost" just so you know. I also want to say that you can not write a sentence like "Hange and Levi found the female titan. And Erwin went too" as I have often noticed you doing. Using the word 'and' to start sentences and using punctuation improperly. However, I don't think that we should be commenting on each others writing styles unless it is just stupid and I am not saying anyone's is. That being said, I would like to ask what you mean by "the first instance being slightly reworded by me." Are you trying to say you have tampered with one of my personal edits?

I do wish you would remain a bit more civil Locket, you seem to be making this discussion about your personal feelings and not what you think is best in regards to policy. This isn't about what you want, it's about what's right. Also, as Prelate stated I am not deciding what happens to Hange's page I am voicing an opinion. I don't see what you mean by "I don't feel you should be the one deciding what does and doesn't look right in writing", I am not deciding anything.

I never claimed no one else made errors. But if you're going to volunteer yourself for stuff, you will eventually come under scrutiny. That being said, I have no problem with owning up to any error I make. I make them, and as we're all free to edit here. I encourage anyone to "fix" my mistakes, as long as you state why in the summary. As I stated before, I'm not implying your edits are dumb or stupid, but there are times when I have my doubts about whether you're rechecking your additions. Especially since you seem to be adding a lot to some pages.

You can indeed use "and" to start a sentence. As I've already looked up why people say you can't. And I don't recall ever writing such a sentence. "Hange and Levi found the female titan. And Erwin went too". That doesn't make any sense. And while I may have been the last one to edit a page with such wording. I highly doubt it was me that added it. As I usually don't add to arcs, let alone the Female Titan arc. If I'm not mistaken most of my mainspace edits take place on stubs, so it's likely not me who made that edit. But link it to me, as I don't believe it.

I am saying one of your edits after mine, made no sense to the rest of the sentence. Although what you added was something I forgot about. So it wasn't wrong to add it, but the sentence you placed it in was weird.

I won't address the last point again, because I assume you replied before my newest post.