Talk:Die Flügel der Freiheit

Hey I'm not German but doesn't this part: " Dies ist das erste Gloria." mean: "This is the first victory" ?

09:52, July 18, 2013 (UTC)Don´t waste my time with rubbish.

Hey. I'm German and I hope you don't mind my terrible wirting style, since my written English is not that good. Well, your translation as such is more or less correct. However in German you would not say "Dies ist das erste Gloria". I'd rather think that before "Gloria" a comma is missing and that "das" has to be changed to "der".

 "Dies ist der erste, Gloria!" Sounds in my ears ways better, because now this sentence can be related to the sentence before. So "der" is related to "Sieg". ---> It's "der Sieg"

 My opinion is that "Gloria" is just an exclamation like "Hooray", since "Gloria" is something religous. Gloria = glory

Delphinium (talk) 12:56, July 22, 2013 (UTC) Delphinium



I just noticed that there is still a lot room for improvement for the Jiyuu no Tsubasa page. The lyrics are missing the last German part and there are few mistakes with other German parts that I noticed. If I find the time, I can make a few improvements myself, I am still unsure though, if the very last line is "Der feind ist grausam" or "Die Flügel der Freiheit".

NeoSuperior (talk) 21:38, July 26, 2013 (UTC)