Board Thread:Shingeki no Kyojin Wiki/@comment-24930713-20150327022217/@comment-5774380-20150424225432

It's true that sometimes is impossible or not ideal to talk only about the character, that's why I said that moderately relevants facts can also be told but quickly.

I just found an example now that I edited the page of the Beast Titan. There was a paragraph there that said:

When Ymir and Eren Yeager are kidnapped by Reiner and Bertolt after the revelation of their identities, Ymir states that the Beast Titan is directly responsible for the appearance of Titans within Wall Rose, possibly in order to "test" humanity's strength, also noting that the reaction of Reiner and Bertolt to its appearance resembled gawking, excited children.

Me and EternalLocket were discussing that the first part within "When" and "identities" doesn't concern to the Beast Titan, and the paragraph as a single idea looks too long. At first I was up to delete the first part, but then I noted it is in the section of Story, which is supposed to tell events in a chronological way, so I thought that fact is relevant to set the time of the events. For that reason I rewrote it as follows:

When Ymir and Eren are kidnapped by Reiner and Bertolt [more summarized], Ymir states that the Beast Titan is directly responsible for the appearance of Titans within Wall Rose; [semicolon for a larger break] possibly in order to "test" humanity's strength'. [period, ends the sentence and begins a new one] She also notes' that the reaction of Reiner and Bertolt to its appearance resembled gawking, excited children.

These are subjective matters and depend of the judgement of the editor; maybe someone could disagree about that example too, but I think the idea is understood: articles to the point, and less related or less relevant information only when necessary and quickly.

About the length of paragraphs, I believe that short paragraphs always look better than walls of text, and every long paragraph can always be divided into shorter paragraphs with the correct wording. That makes the reading lighter and more comfortable from my point of view; but of course, that also can vary in each case.