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MasteroftheWastes wrote: So I did a massive overhaul of the plot, and came up with this.

The year is 2676. Hundreds of years ago the world was struck by an unknown catacylsm. Though the world is rebuilding, the scars of whatever destroyed the Earth are still felt.

Our story takes place in America, a land divided by warring nation states. To the east is the United States of Valiant, a new world dictatorship ruled by the patriotic Valiant Dynasty of Presidents. To the South is the Confederacy and the Bayou Kings of Louisianna. To the west are the cowboys and trailblazers of the great plains. And to the Pacific Ocean are the Mystic Kings and God Emperors of California.

Our hero is a farm boy with psychic powers named Dane. After being exiled and disowned from his fmaily after a psychically induced outburst he comes in contact with a trailblazer named Ezekiel, a former soldier to the King of San Francisco. Ezekiel is also a psychic and tries to help teach Dane on how to control his abilites. That's better