Thread:Abcaweome/@comment-32261140-20181119232550

I decided to undo your edit, instead of rewording it or anything after taking a look at them all. Effectively, aside from what I counted as: 6 cases of wrong capitalization, 5 grammatical mistakes, 2 spelling errors, and other cases of poor syntax, the main issue is to do with repetition and relevance.

For example, the trivia ("As Bertolt is taciturn his Reactions and opinions are often emoted through expressions rather than speech") does not really qualify as relevant trivia. Being taciturn is a point for the personality section, and having opinions shown by expression really isn't relevant enough to be needed anywhere.

Him being a Warrior had already been brought up in the ability section, so did not need repeating.

Generally, if we want us to not revert your edits, you'll need to undergo a big improvement in your grammar and syntax. As your edits are, it really isn't up to the level of quality control we expect from the wiki, and so needs improving. We don't particularly want to spend our own time changing around capitalization, or rewording shaky writing. This is particularly true if not everything you write about is necessary or relevant. Therefore, I implore you to please improve your writing quality. 