Thread:EternalLocket/@comment-5774380-20150424125142/@comment-5774380-20150424173351

That's another issue, and you're right, that's the page of the Beast Titan so the whole part between "When" and "identities" is irrelevant.

Too many articles are written in that way, yesterday I rewrote a tremendously long paragraph in Eren's page that talked about a conversation between Historia and Jean that had nothing to do with Eren. There is another even longer about Kenny talking with his grandfather.

I'm in favor of just removing those sections. If it's the page of a character, we talk about that character, and no more. All unrelated information can be found following the links of the references.

So that paragraph could be simply left like:

''Ymir stated that the Beast Titan is directly responsible for the appearance of Titans within Wall Rose, possibly in order to "test" humanity's strength. She also noted that the reaction of Reiner and Bertolt to its appearance resembled gawking, excited children.''

But coming back to the point, if it's the same idea please whether use semicolons, remove the irrelevant details, or divide the text into true different sentences. Just disconnecting ideas makes the lecture weird.